User-Submitted Improvements

"I don't like that attitude" says sky. "come on, we are going to the library right now! i know there must be something you'll like!" exclaims sky. "Ok, ok i'll go!" says barbie.
"I don't like that attitude" …
"What are you doing?" asks sky, barbie's sister. "writing a literacy narrative for school" replies barbie. "what's that?" asks sky. "our experience with reading and writing" says barbie. "Sounds like a fun and easy assignment" says sky. "Reading is so boring!" says barbie.
"What are you doing?" asks sk…
At computer class, Barbie presents the game she designed. Ms. Smith throughly looks the game over and announces that it is the best in the class. Barbie grabs her laptop back and walks back to her seat and gives her sister a high five. She announces, "I knew I could do it on my own!" As she takes her seat, Steven and Brian exchange envious glances with one another wondering how they will recover from receiving such a low score on their own games. "Maybe we should ask Barbie to help us next time," insists Steve. 

"Yeah, " agrees Brian, "she's going to make one amazing computer engineer."
At computer class, Barbie pre…
"I'm so sorry I didn't know, Skipper," says Barbie. "I have to run off to school now. But I promise not to peek next time." "You better not!" Skipper replies as she playfully hits Barbie with a pillow.
"I'm so sorry I didn't know, …
"Why i hate school but love education, pretty interesting title!" says Chris. "Ha!, he got the first part right!" barbie says. "Don't be so negative about this barbie" says Bradley, "lets just watch this and see what we learn
"Why i hate school but love e…
"It will go faster if Brian and I help," offers Steven. "No, you guys always get caught off guard and it's my game anyways. I'll be better off doing it independently, but thanks," argues Barbie.
"It will go faster if Brian a…
When Barbie puts her flash drive into Skipper's computer the screen starts blinking. "Oh," cries Barbie, "there is a malfunction with the flash drive. Just let me take a look at it quick and I can fix it. I know what I am doing, Skipper."
When Barbie puts her flash dr…
Bradley says to barbie, "That was a strong statement you made in class today." Barbie shrugs. "coming to school can be really fun, you can learn lots of new things" says Chris. "Well i have the video here that the teacher wanted us to watch, lets pop this in and see what the big deal is" says barbie.
Bradley says to barbie, "That…
"Don't look!" yelled Skipper. "I'm shopping for your Christmas present online and want you to be surprised," she explained to Barbie.
"Don't look!" yelled Skipper.…
"I'm creating and designing a whole game by myself," says Barbie. "I was going to let Brian and Steve help me out, but I know I'm fully capable of engineering the site on my own."
"I'm creating and designing a…
Hey guys, I meant to send you the designs, but I decided I could probably do it better than you guys anyway. Thanks for offering to help but turns out I don't need it anymore. I'm a boss.
Hey guys, I meant to send you…
"Do you know why you come to school everyday?" asks ms key, the teacher. "I only come because my parents make me!" says barbie, as the class laughs. The teacher chuckles. "Today we will watch a video that will explain it's importance."
"Do you know why you come to …
"WOW! My designs are really coming along," says a very satisfied Barbie. "The coding for this game shouldn't take long, it'll all be up in no time!"
"WOW! My designs are really c…
"I love creating the design ideas for this game," Barbie says, laughing. "I can't wait to show Steven and Brian and see what they think!"
"I love creating the design i…
"Thank you for designing that poster for my pet grooming business Barbie," says Brian. "No problem," Barbie tells him, " I had fun making it and any struggles I did have in the process simply molded me into a better person."
"Thank you for designing that…
"Thank you for creating that poster for my dog washing business," sais Brain
"No problem!" Barbie tells him, "I was glad to do it and any struggles I had with it simply made me into a stronger person!"
"Thank you for creating that …
Barbie sits in the front row of her new computer class and listens attentively while her instructor explain the basics of the Illistrator program.
Barbie sits in the front row …
"Hurry!" yells Barbie's sister, "you can't be late on your first day"
"I'm going says Barbie, and when I get back i'm going to design that poster," promises Barbie.
"Hurry!" yells Barbie's siste…
"Maybe I can will the computer to work through sheer force of will!" says Barbie's sister.
"How about instead, I attend a computer class," suggests Barbie, "that way I can better myself through education and then pass the knowledge onto you!" 
"what a great idea!" says her sister.
"Maybe I can will the compute…
"that reminds me," says Barbie's younger sister," I drew this puppy for  you to use as inspiration for your design."
"thank you!" exclaims Barbie, "now if only I knew how to use Adobe Illustrator!"
"that reminds me," says Barbi…
"Now that my computers up and running again and I've collected plenty of design strategies and inspiration from different sources, i'm ready to design the poster!"
"Now that my computers up and…
"i'll be honest," Barbie tells her friends, "it's a little frustrating that both of our computers crashed and now we had to come to the library to fix them."
"It's okay," Brian tells her, "just imagine how much more exciting it'll be when the poster is done now that were having trouble with it."
"i'll be honest," Barbie tell…
Barbie's friends agree to help her think of ideas for her project but Barbie wonders, "am I cheating or being unoriginal by using my friends ideas?"
"Of course not!" assures Ken, "nobody could pull a new idea out of the blue, everything has to come from somewhere!"
Barbie's friends agree to hel…
Barbie's younger sister tells her that she has been stressing herself out by working too hard on the poster. Barbie explains to her that hard work is it's own reward and that if making the poster was easy, it wouldn't be worth doing.
Barbie's younger sister tells…
"i appreciate your help," says Barbie, "it's great to get outside opinions and ideas, i'll keep asking for new ideas on how to improve my poster so that I can combine them all and make it my own!"
"i appreciate your help," say…

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