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"Now that Mrs. Smith shared her views on education, I think I will continue putting in hard work because it will pay off in the end!" says Barbie. "Keep it up girl! You can do it!" says Steven as he gives her a high five.
"Now that Mrs. Smith shared h…
Mrs. Smith says "of course it is! Education gave me job opportunities and now I am a more informed observer of universe."
Mrs. Smith says "of course it…
Barbie makes it to computer class just before the bell rings. As soon as class begins, Barbie raises her hand. "Yes, Barbie?" asks Mrs. Smith. "If you spent a lot of money on furthering your education, is it even worth it?" asks Barbie.
Barbie makes it to computer c…
After talking with her guy classmates Barbie listens to a spoken word video she found on youtube to help inspire her maybe. Now she is trying to "understand [her] motives and reassess [her] aims," but she still cant decide if what she is doing is valuable.
After talking with her guy cl…
"Hard work  and Education would be related," offers Steven. "I agree!" says Barbie. "So if education is the key, then is school the lock?" "I think so Barbie!" says Steven. "Hard work and schooling go hand in hand."
"Hard work and Education wou…
As I study, the guys in my class say that "the opportunity to learn and study in a formal dedicated way is still a gift, even if it has become a very expensive one."
As I study, the guys in my cl…
as i study to further my education the guys in my class say "the opportunity to learn and study in a formal dedicated was is still a gift, even if it has become an expensive one!"
as i study to further my educ…
For example, this is my sister and she went to school and now look at her! She may be in her mid 30s still paying off her loans but she answers the question "is it even worth it?"
For example, this is my siste…
I am Barbie and I am trying to further my education so that I can be a strong, independent woman.
I am Barbie and I am trying t…
James makes it to computer class just before the bell rings. As soon as class begins, he raises his hand. "Yes, James?" asks Ms. Smith, the teacher. "If your computer gets a virus and crashes, how can you retrieve all the files you lost?" asks James.
James makes it to computer cl…
"It will go faster if I help," offers Barbie. "Great!" says Brian. "Steven, can you hook Brian's hard drive up to the library's computer?" "Sure!" says Steven. "The library computer has excellent security software to protect it."
"It will go faster if I help,…
After class, Barbie meets with Steven and Brian in the library. "Hi, guys," says Barbie. "I got all of the bbw porn off of your computers" Steven and Brian try to play it cool.
After class, Barbie meets wit…
After class, Barbie meets with Steven and Brian in the library. "Hi, guys," says Barbie. "I fixed both of your computers, and I will send you the designs when I finish!"
After class, Barbie meets wit…
At computer class, Barbie presents the game she designed. Ms. Smith is so impressed by Barbie's hard work and persistence that she gives Barbie extra credit! Barbie's intellect, 4.0 GPA and computer skills have really paid off on this assignment. "I guess if you put your mind to it and work hard with all you have got, you can do anything!" says Barbie happily.
At computer class, Barbie pre…
At computer class, Barbie presents a software program that she designed and that protects women from online cyber bullies. She wants all girls and women to feel safe and empowered online.
At computer class, Barbie pre…
"I've got Skipper's assignment from the hard drive!" exclaims Barbie. "Fantastic!" says Steven. "And her other files, as well?" "I've got everything," says Barbie.  "Now I have to retrieve the files from my hard drive. Both laptops will be as good as new in no time!" "Good jod Barbie" says Steven.
"I've got Skipper's assignmen…
At computer class, Barbie presents the game she designed. Ms. Smith is so impressed that she gives Barbie extra credit! Barbie's terrific computer skills have saved the day for both sisters! "I know I can be a computer engineer, I fixed two laptops with no help!" says Barbie happily.
At computer class, Barbie pre…
"It will go faster if Brian and I help," offers Steven. "I got it covered" says Barbie. "All I have to do is hook Skipper's hard drive up to the library's computer.The library computers have excellent security software to protect it" she says.
"It will go faster if Brian a…
“Thank so much for helping me understand it!” says Barbara to John 

He replies by saying “That’s the point of a community!”
“Thank so much for helping me…
Barbie begins to read her paper. “In those days, it was easy to get lost in the crowd; loss of identity is a terrifying thing. The zombies are the multitude; they have no identity within the crowd. Zombies are soulless beings, they have no mind of their own; they are being controlled by an urge, a spell; a disease. Even the man that remained himself among the hoard of zombies lost himself to an urge: that of hunger. Zombie films like Perished are here to explain the importance of a society, the importance of the community, the importance of the conservation of individuality. Without a society, within our primal selves, there is no individuality. Society, although it groups us together, makes us a crowd, makes us a multitude, and is still able to conserve our individuality. Did they go to watch zombies to have fun? Yes, but also to understand the worst-case scenario.”

Wow! Barbara, you get an A!” says Ms. Turner.
Barbie begins to read her pap…
“Well, negative emotions don’t go away," responds Mike "and they demand periodic exercise. Is our appetite for horror greater than ever when we sense the beginning of the end of how we live? I think so. For example, throughout the range of options you have in zombie media, the prevalent theme you will find is that of the loss of identity. The loss of identity does not only apply to the human turned zombie, but to the remaining survivors as well. You can easily see this in Perished.”

“Yes," interjects John "it is everyone for themselves, and because of this, they have lost their identities in society to replace it with the need to survive.”

“Wow! I think I understand it. I need to go home and write all of this down for tomorrow!” Blurts out Barbara as she runs for the door excited.
“Well, negative emotions don’…
"I'm so sorry, Skipper," says Barbie. "I have to run off to school now. But I promise I will fix your laptop when I get home from school." "You better!" Skipper replies as she playfully hits Barbie with a pillow.
"I'm so sorry, Skipper," says…

"What is the nightmare, though? What is the metaphor?" asks Barbara. "Keep in mind," responds Mike "that we get ideas from our environment, from the people around us, from everything that happens around us. People need inspiration; they need a starting place from where to begin. Back then they had the Ebola outbreak, mass shootings, biological warfare, and a population addicted to consuming as inspiration, and the zombie as an attraction."

“I’ve never thought that zombies could represent fears.” says Barbie while in thought. “The question hangs:” she continues, ”Why would any intelligent person who is already horrified by the news of the day want to watch horror movies? I just don’t get it.”
"What is the nightmare, thou…
"Your robot puppy is so sweet," says Skipper. "Can I play your game?" I only created the designs," Barbie says, laughing, " I need a little more time to turn it into a real game!"
"Your robot puppy is so sweet…
Have you guys seen the movie that was assigned?” asks Barbara. Mike and John both nod. She continues “Although I understand that they reflect issues of the 21st century, I still don’t understand why anyone would watch them.” 

“It’s okay,” replies John, “the answer is that, unlike earnest, realistic films with Good Housekeeping Seals of approval, horror movies – with their sadism, unapologetic sensationalism, lack of nuance, and avid gratification of pathological impulses – offer sharper, more acute versions of our worst case scenarios, they are like brilliant metaphors for what haunts us, and, obviously haunted the people in the 21st century. That is why when we pay our four or five bucks and seat ourselves at tenth-row center in a theater showing a horror movie, we are daring the nightmare.”
Have you guys seen the movie …

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