User-Submitted Improvements

 Laura: "Hey Hanna", what are you doing?
Hanna says, Just applying for college, why aren't you looking into any colleges?
Laura replied back, I just don't think college is for me, I was never really good in school anyway I think I'll just keep my job at the pet store.
Hanna: "We'll I think you should apply for school, I heard you say the other night that you hated that job", Laura said sternly.
Laura responded, I do hate my job, but it pays the bills.
Laura: "Hey Hanna", what are…
Look Barry there goes your friend Barbie. 

Ya, but she doesn't really talk to me much anymore since she has gotten that computer.
Look Barry there goes your fr…
Hi big sis, would you like to go outside and play volleyball with me. 

Naw, I'm searching singles websites for hot guys!
Hi big sis, would you like to…
Mrs. Smith take a look at the picture that I sent to a sexy guy that I meet from a singles website that lives New York.

Barbie you are too young to be talking to a guy online, especially one that lives so far away.
Mrs. Smith take a look at the…
Wow my very own first computer. I am so happy. Now I can chat with all my friends online at anytime.  Since my mom is hardly around I can also go to some singles websites.
Wow my very own first compute…
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After class, Barbie meets with Steven and Brian in the library. "Hi, guys," I've finished the coding and just need someone to do the final testing. Do you know a woman who could help?
After class, Barbie meets wit…
Oh Steven, you are soooo clever.  would you like to hang out?
Oh Steven, you are soooo clev…
"I'm so sorry, Skipper," says Barbie. "I have to run off to school now. But don't worry, I can fix your laptop." "You better!" Skipper replies as she playfully hits Barbie with a pillow.
"I'm so sorry, Skipper," says…
"This is my teacher." says Barbie. "Although school may not seem important right now, my teacher will show me how it will be beneficial in the end. She may still be paying off student loans while being in her mid thirties, but at least she is independent and educated."
"This is my teacher." says Ba…
"Now that Mrs. Smith shared her views on education, I think I will continue putting in hard work because it will pay off in the end!" says Barbie. "Keep it up girl! You can do it!" says Steven as he gives her a high five.
"Now that Mrs. Smith shared h…
Mrs. Smith says "of course it is! Education gave me job opportunities and now I am a more informed observer of universe."
Mrs. Smith says "of course it…
Barbie makes it to computer class just before the bell rings. As soon as class begins, Barbie raises her hand. "Yes, Barbie?" asks Mrs. Smith. "If you spent a lot of money on furthering your education, is it even worth it?" asks Barbie.
Barbie makes it to computer c…
After talking with her guy classmates Barbie listens to a spoken word video she found on youtube to help inspire her maybe. Now she is trying to "understand [her] motives and reassess [her] aims," but she still cant decide if what she is doing is valuable.
After talking with her guy cl…
"Hard work  and Education would be related," offers Steven. "I agree!" says Barbie. "So if education is the key, then is school the lock?" "I think so Barbie!" says Steven. "Hard work and schooling go hand in hand."
"Hard work and Education wou…
As I study, the guys in my class say that "the opportunity to learn and study in a formal dedicated way is still a gift, even if it has become a very expensive one."
As I study, the guys in my cl…
as i study to further my education the guys in my class say "the opportunity to learn and study in a formal dedicated was is still a gift, even if it has become an expensive one!"
as i study to further my educ…
For example, this is my sister and she went to school and now look at her! She may be in her mid 30s still paying off her loans but she answers the question "is it even worth it?"
For example, this is my siste…
I am Barbie and I am trying to further my education so that I can be a strong, independent woman.
I am Barbie and I am trying t…
James makes it to computer class just before the bell rings. As soon as class begins, he raises his hand. "Yes, James?" asks Ms. Smith, the teacher. "If your computer gets a virus and crashes, how can you retrieve all the files you lost?" asks James.
James makes it to computer cl…
"It will go faster if I help," offers Barbie. "Great!" says Brian. "Steven, can you hook Brian's hard drive up to the library's computer?" "Sure!" says Steven. "The library computer has excellent security software to protect it."
"It will go faster if I help,…
After class, Barbie meets with Steven and Brian in the library. "Hi, guys," says Barbie. "I got all of the bbw porn off of your computers" Steven and Brian try to play it cool.
After class, Barbie meets wit…
After class, Barbie meets with Steven and Brian in the library. "Hi, guys," says Barbie. "I fixed both of your computers, and I will send you the designs when I finish!"
After class, Barbie meets wit…
At computer class, Barbie presents the game she designed. Ms. Smith is so impressed by Barbie's hard work and persistence that she gives Barbie extra credit! Barbie's intellect, 4.0 GPA and computer skills have really paid off on this assignment. "I guess if you put your mind to it and work hard with all you have got, you can do anything!" says Barbie happily.
At computer class, Barbie pre…
At computer class, Barbie presents a software program that she designed and that protects women from online cyber bullies. She wants all girls and women to feel safe and empowered online.
At computer class, Barbie pre…

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